Score: 7

"Heh."

submission: Phils Invited

date: September 10, 2007

Funny premise and a pretty good script. The lazy delivery was pretty cool too. The audio was of a bad quality though and you really need to work on your lip-sync.

Not bad but not great ^^

Score: 8

"Fun"

submission: Honey Smack HD

date: September 10, 2007

As much as I hate to see my childhood heroes desecrated, that was quite fun to watch. The simple graphics and simple voice (very 'matter-of-fact' narration) all combined very well to make an enjoyable viewing experience.

Good job.

Score: 7

"Fun"

submission: SummerShorts

date: September 5, 2007

While I think some of the visuals are overly-basic, the voice-acting had so much energy that I enjoyed myself.

Work on your graphics: Your lip-sync comprised of squares moving up and down;try to add some more definition to each character, making them all a bit more unique. Maybe I'm a graphics whore, but I think it would have added to the experience.

Enjoyable but still room for improvement. Keep it up buddeh :D

Score: 10

"Sweet?"

submission: Lemon Smash

date: September 3, 2007

You sure this game isn't BITTER?

*cough*

You know I love this game: simple and addictive, but very well presented.

5'd and <3'd

Score: 10

"Nice Whale."

submission: Surfs Up!

date: September 3, 2007

Great colours and style. The Whale made me chuckle.

5/5

Good job!

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Xionic Madness - Trailer

date: August 26, 2007

I'm glad to see you're still making flash - keep at it, it's looking great :)

Score: 10

"That's not even funny. Just epic."

submission: Big Ass Badgers

date: July 13, 2007

I'm yet to see transformers but I hope it's half as intense as your brilliant reworking of it. Thank you for this creation, it's truly a gift.

Score: 7

"..."

submission: Luis' Mexican Adventures!

date: July 12, 2007

I don't know who you are or what you're trying to do...

I didn't know you could draw ^^

Fived.

Score: 7

"^^"

submission: Happy Are Those !

date: June 20, 2007

Graphics: Considering you're aiming for a younger market, the graphics were great: colourful; interesting; and stylised. You did a good job in appealing to the child in all of us!

Style: The style and the graphics really complimented each other well. The emotions were apparent with each character in each situation and displayed through interesting means.

Sound: Nice use of music and sound effects throughout.

Interactivity: Replay button please!

Humour: not particularly funny, but it's quite inane fun. You won't laugh watching this, but it is entertaining.

I enjoyed watching this. Cute graphics, a moral-based story and some great sound throughout. I hope that this got you the grade you deserve with your Btec.

4/5

Score: 7

"Gosh."

submission: NARUTO: The Musical

date: June 20, 2007

I really enjoyed that.

Graphics: superb. They were amazing in some places and of an extremely high standard throughout.

Style: your animation was somewhat limited. This is understandable due to the complexity of the characters you were drawing: try and find a balance between detail and simplicity with which you can animate nicely.

Sound: I absolutely love the choice of songs. I'm now hooked on sublime. Full marks.

Violence: Nothing graphic. Meh.

Interactivity: Replay button next time, please!

Humour: The break-neck speed of it all as well as the varied songs made this an extremely fun watch. I didn't laugh out loud, but it certainly made me smile and put me in a good mood.

That's my critique, feel free to work with it as you will!

4/5 and favourite.