Score: 10

"Fun!"

submission: Mad Vlad II: Revamped

date: May 3, 2008

I've always thought of you as more a coder than an artist. Needless to say, when you create something like this (a beautiful and expansive game containing quite a interesting sense of humour) I naturally feel a little scared... You're a triple-threat!

The only qualm that I had with the controls was that using 'a' for jump didn't feel very intuitive. Maybe you could've used the space bar instead?

Your backgrounds were a joy to behold! The somewhat saturated colours really added mood to the proceedings along with the music, setting the scene perfectly for your comedic, anachronism-packed romp.

Story-wise, the way in which the absurd was dealt with in such a serious and stern manner was fantastic. The story, which was portrayed superbly through well-placed cut scenes, was certainly a laugh.

Very well done with this game, Paranoia, I thoroughly enjoyed playing it. Work a bit on your characters (they looked a little cut-out/static at some points) and soon you'll be not only a phenomenal coder, but a truly awesome artist.

'Grats!

Score: 10

"That was lolzy :3"

submission: Pico: The Shitty Power

date: May 1, 2008

Especially the black and white bit at the end. Sick as. Thanks for the special thanks - I find myself positively inspired (again) by your work.

5/5 yo!

Score: 6

"That was pretty fun"

submission: The Duders: Kush Cannon!

date: February 26, 2008

Nice timing with the whole thing. It was sorta entertaining in an odd way - probably 'cause I know you through the forums.

I'd recommend trying to brighten everything up. All the gray colours were pretty...pretty bland. Also, the black lines were quite oppressive (especially in the background - they made the characters blend in with them). If I were you, my next step would be to try and liven up the colours and experiment with different coloured lines.

Keep it up.

Score: 6

"Oh Snap!"

submission: [SCRUBS]

date: October 5, 2007

I remember you posting about this years ago. I was thinking about it the other day - whether I should make one or not.

Anyways. Not a bad job. You're better now than when you started it, so all constructive crit. would be wasted!

3/5

Score: 7

"Heh."

submission: Phils Invited

date: September 10, 2007

Funny premise and a pretty good script. The lazy delivery was pretty cool too. The audio was of a bad quality though and you really need to work on your lip-sync.

Not bad but not great ^^

Score: 8

"Fun"

submission: Honey Smack HD

date: September 10, 2007

As much as I hate to see my childhood heroes desecrated, that was quite fun to watch. The simple graphics and simple voice (very 'matter-of-fact' narration) all combined very well to make an enjoyable viewing experience.

Good job.

Score: 7

"Fun"

submission: SummerShorts

date: September 5, 2007

While I think some of the visuals are overly-basic, the voice-acting had so much energy that I enjoyed myself.

Work on your graphics: Your lip-sync comprised of squares moving up and down;try to add some more definition to each character, making them all a bit more unique. Maybe I'm a graphics whore, but I think it would have added to the experience.

Enjoyable but still room for improvement. Keep it up buddeh :D

Score: 10

"Sweet?"

submission: Lemon Smash

date: September 3, 2007

You sure this game isn't BITTER?

*cough*

You know I love this game: simple and addictive, but very well presented.

5'd and <3'd

Score: 10

"Nice Whale."

submission: Surfs Up!

date: September 3, 2007

Great colours and style. The Whale made me chuckle.

5/5

Good job!

Score: 7

"^^"

submission: Happy Are Those !

date: June 20, 2007

Graphics: Considering you're aiming for a younger market, the graphics were great: colourful; interesting; and stylised. You did a good job in appealing to the child in all of us!

Style: The style and the graphics really complimented each other well. The emotions were apparent with each character in each situation and displayed through interesting means.

Sound: Nice use of music and sound effects throughout.

Interactivity: Replay button please!

Humour: not particularly funny, but it's quite inane fun. You won't laugh watching this, but it is entertaining.

I enjoyed watching this. Cute graphics, a moral-based story and some great sound throughout. I hope that this got you the grade you deserve with your Btec.

4/5